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A Kid Like Me

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NicoleRocker12367
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When your a kid like me,
Days pass slowly or fast
No choices but to see
every bit of the past

Every kid like me,
sees a change in mood
in every person around them
moody people, crazy people
Normal doesn't seem to exist

Drama swirls around
like leaves on bright fall days
They can't seem to resist
the compusion, temptation
hurtful lies or uncovered truth
gossip brings to them

Friendships end
Some begin
You can never really tell
when a person who
was good to you
will change their style just like that

Relationships change
cheating kills
every single heart
looks and smiles
matter too much
in every single trial.

I'm sure when you finish
this poem short but long
You'll see, i'm sure you'll see
that your a kid like me
a crazy, confused
wannabe kid like me

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1 posted 12-16-2009 03:11 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I am a rather "older" kid like you.  Nicely done.

            
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♥ Mysteria ♥

Ravagence
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2 posted 12-17-2009 04:18 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

Makes me never want to grow up. I love it.
Leanne <3
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3 posted 12-19-2009 07:59 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

i loved reading this poem, i felt a mixture of happiness and sadness, because truth is i know deep down i'll always be a  "wannabe kid"  thanks for sharing this
-Lee
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4 posted 12-20-2009 10:35 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

haha I am a kid (kinda) and i absolutely love this! but one thing is that if your going to rhyme in your poem make it consistent.

-Zach
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Last stanza was simply...epic, I enjoyed it
 
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