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m48
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Bloody red drops
stained clouds in the skys
thinking of you makes me
so very high

clouds of green
skys of gray
hoping you will never go away

love fails to see the lies
when your friends try to be
so wise

and thats how young love dies
when there are red tear drops
in the skys

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Hi Tes!

I'm Christine and I like your poem. It's pretty cool though a bit sad.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

 
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