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Now That It's Fallen

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 12-12-2009 08:59 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

- Dedicated to my friend Katie. I need to add more, but right now i've run out of creative juices. :|

I feel as though I'm breaking,
I can't work this out.
Why is death such a burden?
Why is life filled with doubt?

Now that the snow has fallen,
you're always on my mind;
Taken away without a thought,
leaving the world behind.

I'll miss you for eternity,
my heart will always cry.
And every snowfall from now on,
I'll look up to the sky.
{~~*~~}


EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (12-12-2009 10:43 PM).]

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Zeigeist
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1 posted 12-12-2009 09:26 PM       View Profile for Zeigeist   Email Zeigeist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zeigeist

A very special tribute. Wonderful

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 12-12-2009 10:44 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thank you

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

m48
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3 posted 12-14-2009 08:23 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

wow what a tribute.that was really sweet. i liked it.it brought a tear.
ThatOneGuy
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4 posted 12-15-2009 04:09 PM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

this is really good. and something i think a lot of people can relate to. good work
XxForever.BrokenxX
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5 posted 12-17-2009 11:29 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thanks to both of you. I truly do appreciate your comments.

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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