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Stitches
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Don't let this silence grow between us
Let his corridor end
Because I would rather not have a lover
And keep you as my friend.

After all that's passed between us
I think it's time we're through
Because I just can't keep pretending
That I am close to you.

A distance is a distance
No matter how near or far
Just because you have a rocket
Doesn't mean you'll reach a star.

So lay down and close your fingers
This is our one last chance
To after all that's been between us
Enact our parting dance.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

© Copyright 2009 Gabrielle Cohen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-12-2009 10:11 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Very good advise in this poem, and it's great to dissolve relationships by being friends.  Very nicely done.

            
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2 posted 12-13-2009 05:46 AM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Thank-you

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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3 posted 12-13-2009 06:40 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

i really liked the message in this poem, helps me alot in a current situation

nice write
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4 posted 12-14-2009 04:57 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

nicly written. what a thinker.i liked it alot.
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5 posted 12-15-2009 10:16 AM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Thank-you!

And I'm glad to be of help.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

 
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