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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Don't let this silence grow between us Let his corridor end Because I would rather not have a lover And keep you as my friend. After all that's passed between us I think it's time we're through Because I just can't keep pretending That I am close to you. A distance is a distance No matter how near or far Just because you have a rocket Doesn't mean you'll reach a star. So lay down and close your fingers This is our one last chance To after all that's been between us Enact our parting dance. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very good advise in this poem, and it's great to dissolve relationships by being friends. Very nicely done. |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Thank-you  'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
i really liked the message in this poem, helps me alot in a current situation nice write |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
nicly written. what a thinker.i liked it alot. |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Thank-you! And I'm glad to be of help. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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