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Your Life Script

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it's more of a song, and it's not finished. critique please

Let me write our script
Youve got a starring role
Youre the antagonist
Who slowly loses his soul

Act 1 scene 1
You break a few hearts
You go on living your life
Loving each brand new start

It seems alright
It seems ok
You never thought this
Fairytale could go astray

Act 2 scene 2
You lose the love you life
Shes running away from you
Running to the arms of Christ

I think you understand the plot
I think you get what I mean
So skipping down to the climax
You stare in the dramatic scene

You ask me why do I hate you?
I tell you you did this to yourself
You say you got other friends
I reply look around, theres no one else

Baby you made them all leave
You were too angry too full of hate
I tried to help you but you pushed me away
And now babe its too late



only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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