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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Its been a while since my last write.  But I just wrote this while Fiona Apple's songs were my Muse. This poem might be confusing for some. But somewhere in my twisted mind it makes sense.  LOL Enjoy guys.--------------------------------------------------- See it. Soft as snow. delicate as meadow birds Grace across the stage Silent without a word Silhouette smile Hidden behind darkness veil No glimmer in his eyes No hope to prevail He'll dance a dance Marvel you with his twirls But you can't see shadow puppet Writhe or unfurl.. under pressuring eyes.. Tell me if you notice For he's hidden it well, The glowing lights of his personal Hell. Look closely kiddies As he dances for the kings Don't you see it too? That little white hope.. ..pulling the strings? Maybe its just me.. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
omg loved it!! everything from "under pressuring eyes" was just breath-taking! great write  only a vampire can love you forever. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Not confusing to me, my friend. I think it's excellent and I see exactly where you were going with it....and you did it well.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Me too Zach, I "got it." Your poetry is always very well thought out. |
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