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Belinda
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0 posted 12-10-2009 02:50 PM       View Profile for Belinda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Belinda

Despite your refusal to acknowledge this,
Our relationship has been forever changed.
You may attempt to ignore the bruised past,
But it determines how the future is arranged.

When you again, sob down the phone to me,
I feel a bizarre emotion begin to arise.
No longer one of anger and disappointment,
More one that is bored of your cries.

As my mother you should demand respect,
And Yet,
You wallow in self pity, you beg for my attention,
You expect my full forgiveness, and ask for my corrections.

You are unable to function "adequately"
And I feel perhaps I should have more sympathy,
But I face this task with immense difficulty,
As i think of my future without you, so positively.

This year, I love you more than last year,
Not quite as much as a few years before that,
But surely not as much as next year.
Our love is complicated, but conquers most.

From where I stand it's simple,
I will love you forever and a day.
But until you drop that bottle,
To you, I have nothing left to say.

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

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Belinda
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1 posted 12-10-2009 03:37 PM       View Profile for Belinda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Belinda

I know it's a bit rough, but i've been out of the game for a while haha.

Really hope everyone is doing well though,
Merry Christmas to all though
Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

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2 posted 12-10-2009 09:31 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I think your message is coming out loud and clear, and Belinda, I am sure there are many in those shoes.  I will hope it just gets better for them.

            
Happy Holidays
♥ Mysteria ♥

RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 12-10-2009 10:04 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Bellz!! it's sooo sooo good to have you back!!.. your work is great as always.. Your message comes across loud and clear!!..

Merry Christmas.
m48
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4 posted 12-11-2009 11:35 AM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

nicly written.good story exicution and attention to detail.

ps ive been out of the game for a while too and am looking to get feed back as well just look for any thing written by m48 thanks!
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