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m48
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0 posted 12-09-2009 01:55 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for m48

~please comment,thank you.~


broken glass lay on the floor
shadderd love from before
lasting only minutes
for mistrust
showing life in darkness
not just lust

though when you first arived
i still felt shy
you smiled and took my hand
said you understood
i didnt believe you
now i do

you may never realize
just what you are to me
sometimes you take my breath away
so i cant speak
but thats just fine
you saw the light
when i thought the mirror lied

so take this key
and come inside
im opening the door
just a slit
like i never thought i could
again
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watchingsummer
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1 posted 12-13-2009 04:29 PM       View Profile for watchingsummer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for watchingsummer

that was really good, it got me thinking.

good job!

"If I know what love is, it is because of you." -Hermann Hesse

m48
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thank you im glad you enjoyed it!
 
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