British Columbia, Canada
I got somewhat confused as to whether this was for your Grandmother or Mother, so I took your lead from your words. This is what I came up with, taking away some words that were not necessary, and making sure your rhyme was flow.
So, here you go, have a look at these suggestions, and perhaps it will spark some changes?
You're an angel sent from up above
Brought to us by a graceful dove.
Wonderful wife and mother too,
I'm so lucky to have a Grandma like you.
You're always positive with a happy glow
Your smile could brighten even the snow!
The entire family agrees on what I say,
No one compares to your loving way.
I stand tall and proud as I can say,
This heaven-sent angel is my mama today.
You bless us with your presence, you see,
As we gather each year around the tree.
You're truly amazing, I love you, I do!
This is my way of saying simply, "Thank you!"
By the way, Mother or Grandmother, I would sure be very proud to receive this, very nicely done! Your feelings come through loud and clear.
♥ Mysteria ♥