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Once upon a December

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rebelangelv
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0 posted 12-08-2009 09:01 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rebelangelv


In this cold rainy weather
That comes only in December
I ask you baby plead you
Just try to remember

Remember what is was like
To cuddle with someone you love
To feel their breath upon your cheek
Knowing that was enough

Remember the icy touch of skin
Like when your hands where cold
Remember never needing gloves
instead anotherís hand to hold

Remember sitting by the fire
Both gazing at the Christmas tree
Remember the magic you always felt
The love that set you free

It was wonderful wasnít it?
The spirited memory of it all
But can you still rememberÖ.
The tragedy, the pain, the fall?

Now I bring you back
Back to reality
Another year gone by
But this time thereís no me

Can you still feel the magic?
Is it just that time of year?
Or could it be the people you spend it with,
The ones that you hold dear?

I want my special time
That blessed Christmas cheer
The love that finds its way through wars
Through doubts and through fears

Do you want the same as I?
Even though it cannot last?
Then letís go back to when we remember
Remember the beauties of the past

Can you feel the magic now?
Can you still remember?
I love you as I did back then
In that cold rainy December.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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I am the arch angel
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1 posted 12-08-2009 09:58 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

wow this is really good and such a very well written poem, props!
rebelangelv
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2 posted 12-08-2009 10:21 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

awww thank you! i appreciate it!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Leanne <3
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3 posted 12-09-2009 01:49 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

such a beautiful poem, loved every word of it!!
-Lee
m48
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4 posted 12-09-2009 01:34 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

that was so wonderful. it caught me by the heart strings and kept a hold major props.
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