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HopeAgain
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0 posted 12-07-2009 07:43 PM       View Profile for HopeAgain   Email HopeAgain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HopeAgain

Here is one that deals with the constant fail of a broken heart to get out of its shell, despite a thousand more tries. Enjoy.


A thousand More


Rescue my heart, From all this pain
take it a thousand miles away
a thousand more will form
to haunt me for a thousand more day

Wipe away all my tears
throw it a thousand oceans deep
a thousand more will still fall
a thousand more will my heart weep

dry my eyes
close them a thousand years
a thousand more will it be wet
from a thousand more tears

Light me a candle
make it a thousand times bright
but a thousand more winds will blow
with its thousand more might

Hold my hand
guide me through a thousand door
a thousand locks will appear
closing down a thousand more

Give me wings
let my fly a thousand sky
a thousand wind will knock me down
despite a thousand more try
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Very well done.  I too have had days where you could blow me over with a feather.
 
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