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Flipping for Destiny

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Ravagence
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since 08-16-2009
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0 posted 12-04-2009 06:48 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

Drab days fly by like
ravens on steroids.

Houses on fire,
smoke filling the air.

Money is no object;
it's a matter of life or death.

A single penny dropped,
means a mob.

Heads or Tails,
Does it matter?

We either keep our heads,
or lose our tails to those more fortunate.

Surrender to niceness,
and you get tails.

Stay with the owls,
and you get heads.

the only way I know how to explain it,
is to say; it's like flipping for destiny;

Heads, or
Tails.
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I am the arch angel
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since 02-02-2008
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1 posted 12-05-2009 12:06 AM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

cool storyline, i like it. maybe you should group some of your stanza's though, it will look nicer and have more of a flow. but thats just me. good write!
 
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