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Teen Poetry #9

Flipping for Destiny

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

0 posted 2009-12-04 06:48 PM

Drab days fly by like
ravens on steroids.

Houses on fire,
smoke filling the air.

Money is no object;
it's a matter of life or death.

A single penny dropped,
means a mob.

Heads or Tails,
Does it matter?

We either keep our heads,
or lose our tails to those more fortunate.

Surrender to niceness,
and you get tails.

Stay with the owls,
and you get heads.

the only way I know how to explain it,
is to say; it's like flipping for destiny;

Heads, or
Tails.

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

1 posted 2009-12-05 12:06 PM

cool storyline, i like it. maybe you should group some of your stanza's though, it will look nicer and have more of a flow. but thats just me. good write!

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