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the_inner_me11
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0 posted 12-03-2009 09:43 PM       View Profile for the_inner_me11   Email the_inner_me11   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_inner_me11

*Comment please.(=


You shall never know the pain I held,
The tears I cried,
The hurt I felt inside.
Within my shaking hands I hold memories of my former self,
I was broken,
Dying,
Screaming for someone to help.
Below my layers lies a sad little girl,
A faint reminder of that old state of me,
The naive girl I used to be.
I knew nothing but pain,
Lost love,
And tainted lies.
Then I met you.
Your body blew my mind like a shot to the head,
Your smile shone brighter than the summer sun.
You gave me hope,
I felt that someday I could love again,
That happiness was no longer just a dreamers joke.
I can't thank you enough,
For you glued back the pieces of my broken heart,
Never minding that my edges were sharp.
You'll never understand to what extent do I love you,
For if you did I would be afraid I'd lose you too.
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I am the arch angel
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1 posted 12-05-2009 12:04 AM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

wooow! this is hella good
precious pearls
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2 posted 12-06-2009 01:21 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

OMG that was sooooo good!
the_inner_me11
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3 posted 12-06-2009 10:03 PM       View Profile for the_inner_me11   Email the_inner_me11   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_inner_me11

Thank you.(=
UNTAMEDelegance
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4 posted 12-07-2009 02:41 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

WOW... that was me. That was me before I found him. Thank you SO SO much for writing this. It's amazing feeling to see my exact feelings written into word. This is a beautiful, powerful write. I like your style very much!=^.^=
~UNTAMEDelegance
m48
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5 posted 12-09-2009 01:43 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

i know exactly where you are comming from in this. i have someone simular in my life as we speak and he has no idea how much he means to me its so hard to put into words or anything really. nicely written.
the_inner_me11
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6 posted 12-09-2009 09:31 PM       View Profile for the_inner_me11   Email the_inner_me11   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_inner_me11

Thank you. Im so happy you could relate.(=
Belinda
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7 posted 12-10-2009 02:53 PM       View Profile for Belinda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Belinda

Just remembered why I used to come on this forum so much, great write. I loved the rhythm.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

ThatOneGuy
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8 posted 12-15-2009 04:02 PM       View Profile for ThatOneGuy   Email ThatOneGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThatOneGuy

wow that is really good i like it a lot! you have a really good flow to your writing
 
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