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Dont say Good Bye

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MadMarcus
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Sweden, Solna


0 posted 12-02-2009 04:21 PM       View Profile for MadMarcus   Email MadMarcus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MadMarcus


I really hate the word Good Bye.

Becuse when you say it my heart cries.

When your not by my side my soul dies.

My mind hurts becuse of the lies.

You said you only want to be friends, i said thats okey.

But when evry inch of my body want to scream NO WAY!

I love you and i will always do so dont go away.

Please i dont want to lie.

Dont say Good Bye.
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m48
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1 posted 12-03-2009 06:06 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

i totally understand.that poem pulled at memories.great job in expressing those feelings.

ps please read my poem, its written by m48 thats me.
MadMarcus
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2 posted 12-04-2009 05:29 PM       View Profile for MadMarcus   Email MadMarcus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MadMarcus

Thanks ^^ Im happy that you understand what im trying to say with this poem<3
 
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