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0 posted 12-02-2009 04:12 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for m48


please note this is a simular poem to another written on this very forum but i am the same writer and i just wanted to make this poem my first under my new name thats all.

its been a year past now
comming upon the second winter of your company
though still a well kept secret
you swim inside me
only i know your idenity
thats what you asked of me
the time and things we have shared
echo in my heart
when i dream i see your face
it works
keeping the nightsmares and evil things at bay
you are stronger now then before
sharing more
i love you this way
open not like a book or novel
but a secret just for me
sweetest of dreams my dark angel
youre enough light for me


[This message has been edited by m48 (12-03-2009 03:04 PM).]

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1 posted 12-02-2009 07:07 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

i like the storyline, but it seemed to mislead me a bit, tricky tricky, your poem is a ninja
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thank you! but how did my poem mis lead you?
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it liked changed topics for a second but then got back on subject
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4 posted 12-07-2009 01:54 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

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