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I am the arch angel
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0 posted 11-30-2009 04:49 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for I am the arch angel


The necks of our youth
in that hanging noose
always caught up
but wasn't enough

look at what the worlds come to
brought down by the ones we looked up to
Blaming and pushing each other around
who's the villain now?

But we can't give up hope
Even if the world is high on dope
God has to save us one day
He can use the rage of our youth today

But i can see the pain
And the bloody rain
But i have to fix the world
one person at a time, every boy and girl
© Copyright 2009 Keagan lear - All Rights Reserved
Leanne <3
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1 posted 12-01-2009 05:16 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

it's scary how it's all so true.
beautiful write
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2 posted 12-01-2009 12:25 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"look at what the worlds come to
brought down by the ones we looked up to
Blaming and pushing each other around
who's the villain now?"

agreed.
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3 posted 12-02-2009 05:06 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

captivating. simply put it was wonderful and well written.

also if maybe you could take alook at my poem under m48 please. that would be greatly appriciated.
 
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