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Teen Poetry #9

The end.

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2009-11-30 04:49 PM

The necks of our youth
in that hanging noose
always caught up
but wasn't enough

look at what the worlds come to
brought down by the ones we looked up to
Blaming and pushing each other around
who's the villain now?

But we can't give up hope
Even if the world is high on dope
God has to save us one day
He can use the rage of our youth today

But i can see the pain
And the bloody rain
But i have to fix the world
one person at a time, every boy and girl

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

1 posted 2009-12-01 05:16 AM

it's scary how it's all so true.
beautiful write

-Lee

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2009-12-01 12:25 PM

"look at what the worlds come to
brought down by the ones we looked up to
Blaming and pushing each other around
who's the villain now?"

agreed.

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

3 posted 2009-12-02 05:06 PM

captivating. simply put it was wonderful and well written.

also if maybe you could take alook at my poem under m48 please. that would be greatly appriciated.

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