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Untitled (welcome to suggest titles) and Moral Haiku

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Ravagence
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since 08-16-2009
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0 posted 11-30-2009 04:02 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

I have to poems here. One's a haiku so I am including it with my main one.

Untitled

I knew it was my job,
I should have found a way out.
Found a way to save us all,
from and impending wall of flames.
Licking our heels,
singed clothes.
Ankles buckling,
nearing a dead end.
Yet we don't stop,
although death is,
in fact; sure.
We run for as long as we can,
Not to escape the flames,
but to finish our prayers,
before death.


Moral Haiku

Self esteem, a joke.
Too much has corroded your morals.
Left with out a trace.
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Stitches
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since 11-27-2009
Posts 151
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1 posted 11-30-2009 07:23 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

I like it.

Titles maybe:
-Retribution
-Incineration
-Purge

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

m48
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since 12-02-2009
Posts 106


2 posted 12-03-2009 02:58 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

i enjoyed the second peice the best. um a title idea could be simply not so simple. i use odd titles for my poems.

ps could u read my poem my name is m48.
 
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