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A Crushing Truth

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poindexter39
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Rapid with no hesitation
Like a language with no translation
Like a book with no explanation

You consume my heart as fast as a hawk
To you I'm nothing but a dork
To you my whisper is a scraping chalk
While my love can stretch to the city of New York

You swat me away like a little fly
While the hatred you feel flows by
If you only you knew
That all I saw
Was you

Before you met me I was written off
And when i spoke you'd go cough cough
I was crushed to hear that since day 1
You referred to me as the ugly one
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I enjoy the contrast between more classical poetic features and modern-day stuff.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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