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You Won't See Me Cry

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rebelangelv
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0 posted 11-24-2009 07:53 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rebelangelv


it's a song, so idk how the rhythm sounds but the music is semi pretty...kinda. :/


Iím not gunna cry
What you say canít hurt me
I wonít show weakness
I promise you wonít see

You can beat me down
You can say the worse
I wonít fight back
I wonít curse

But one thing that I can guarantee
The one thing I promise you wonít see

You wonít see me cry
You wonít see me break
Iím not gunna show my weakness
My footing will not shake

I wonít allow the tears
To run down my reddened cheek
You wonít see me cry
That I guarantee

It may be tough
And I may be tender
But that doesnít mean
That Iíll ever surrender

Give it your best shot
Ďcause Iím not fighting back
Iím taking the high road
And not turning back

And one thing that I can guarantee
One thing I promise you wonít see

You wonít see me cry
You wonít see me break
Iím not gunna show my weakness
My footing will not shake

I wonít allow the tears
To run down my reddened cheek
You wonít see me cry
That I guarantee

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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madelyn
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1 posted 11-25-2009 12:17 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

Really good... i'd love to hear it with music.

Loved it!! Keep up the magic!!
rebelangelv
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2 posted 11-25-2009 04:39 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

thanks!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Leanne <3
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3 posted 11-26-2009 06:59 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

i really liked this one!
and im with madelyn - id love to hear it with the music
-Lee
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