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My lonely marble

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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 11-20-2009 07:31 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy


There's twisted teal,
Trapped in
A small sphere;
A slave.

It rolls and rolls; alone,

Stumbling
Across stiff stone,
Very slowly,
Very fast,
It seems, all the same.

Silent it waits,
Anxious
To make an escape,
To roll, and roll,

And roll, Away!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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Stitches
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since 11-27-2009
Posts 151
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1 posted 11-30-2009 10:32 AM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Nice double meaning.

Also...

I like marbles.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

m48
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since 12-02-2009
Posts 106


2 posted 12-03-2009 06:09 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

that was oddly cute and i get it.nicly expressed.

ps please read a poem by m48 thats me.im new,sorta.
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