As you spend the night in my dreams, you spend another night in heaven.

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Teen Poetry #9

As you spend the night in my dreams, you spend another night in heaven.

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2009-11-20 03:38 PM

Another day i spend without you
is another day in hell
There is nothing i can do
no way i can be well

Six feet down
is six feet too deep
And i'll leave this town
your grave will be the last thing i see

Your all i think about
and how i never made things right
but i'll always remember you without a doubt
and i'll see you in my dreams tonight

Tonight shall be four long years
I've never seen four years so bad
And with all these tears
i'll always love you dad.

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2009-11-20 06:05 PM

Aww.. I have tears for you..
great right hun..

xx's and Ooo's

Miss you!!

Jess

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2009-11-20 09:27 PM

Keagan, this is beautiful it really is.
I can't really think of anything else to say so I'll just leave it at that.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

3 posted 2009-11-21 12:53 PM

such a heartfelt poem, im sorry for your loss.
-Lee

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2009-11-21 10:09 AM

R.I.P Mr.Lear..
Dude this prolly beats my poem that I wrote for ya a while ago. (my first poem lol)
Great stuff dude. Keep it up.

Always here if ya need me,
-Zach

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2009-11-28 12:03 PM

Yes I know I already commented on it but I think it deserves another. I've read it a total of five times now, and every time it makes me cry.

Hang in there, I know you can make it.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2009-11-28 02:58 PM

This is heartbreaking and such a loving tribute.

Alison

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2009-11-28 03:00 PM

You know, I just want to hug you - I know that sounds so totally stupid. But, my heart hurts with yours.

A

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

8 posted 2009-11-30 04:42 PM

awh thanks guys and alison. *hugs* thanks

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