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As you spend the night in my dreams, you spend another night in heaven.

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I am the arch angel
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0 posted 11-20-2009 03:38 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for I am the arch angel

Another day i spend without you
is another day in hell
There is nothing i can do
no way i can be well

Six feet down
is six feet too deep
And i'll leave this town
your grave will be the last thing i see

Your all i think about
and how i never made things right
but i'll always remember you without a doubt
and i'll see you in my dreams tonight

Tonight shall be four long years
I've never seen four years so bad
And with all these tears
i'll always love you dad.
© Copyright 2009 Keagan lear - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-20-2009 06:05 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Aww.. I have tears for you..
great right hun..

xx's and Ooo's

Miss you!!

Jess
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2 posted 11-20-2009 09:27 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Keagan, this is beautiful it really is.
I can't really think of anything else to say so I'll just leave it at that.

  

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EmilyTheStrange
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Leanne <3
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3 posted 11-21-2009 12:53 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

such a heartfelt poem, im sorry for your loss.
-Lee
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4 posted 11-21-2009 10:09 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

R.I.P Mr.Lear..
Dude this prolly beats my poem that I wrote for ya a while ago. (my first poem lol)
Great stuff dude. Keep it up.

Always here if ya need me,
-Zach
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5 posted 11-28-2009 12:03 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Yes I know I already commented on it but I think it deserves another. I've read it a total of five times now, and every time it makes me cry.

Hang in there, I know you can make it.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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6 posted 11-28-2009 02:58 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

This is heartbreaking and such a loving tribute.  

Alison
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7 posted 11-28-2009 03:00 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

You know, I just want to hug you - I know that sounds so totally stupid.  But, my heart hurts with yours.

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8 posted 11-30-2009 04:42 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

awh thanks guys and alison. *hugs*  thanks
 
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