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Ravagence
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Autumn leaves,
Angel wings,
This one must have;
fallen from the trees.

Golden eyes,
glimmering in the moonlight,
Glowing hair;
flowing like honey.

Slowing My earth down,
she fell like a comet,
Burning her way,
so beautifully complex.

Thou not beautiful,
but you are what I need,
to make me complete for;
I could never love anything so less imperfect
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1 posted 11-19-2009 10:12 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Just like a leaf we all have our seasons, and although we may like one over another, it takes all four to make a season.  So too is it with beauty both out and in to measure one's radiance.  Well done.
Rosie_Orange
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i love the comparison and the descriptions! well done

Lost girl..

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Lovely write! I really like it!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

 
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