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Forever Yours

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poindexter39
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Forever and ever
We will stay together
Our lives can't be controlled
By a mere lever

I was once told
Love lasts forever
But when u left
I was a victim of theft

When we first met
From the first moment
I made a bet
That we would care
Care for each other
Forever and ever

When we cared
Cared for each other
For the first time
Love was found

When yo left left
Left with another
For the first time
Heartbreak was found

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precious pearls
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1 posted 11-19-2009 08:02 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

great first post!!!! brought tears to my eyes... can totally relate!! loved it!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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2 posted 11-19-2009 10:09 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

A very poignant first post.  Welcome to the Teen Forum at Passions, and we all hope you will like it here as much as we do.  
poindexter39
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3 posted 11-20-2009 12:36 AM       View Profile for poindexter39   Email poindexter39   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poindexter39

Thx for the reply
I usually get teased about poetry
Thankyou for the comment
p.s i kind of messed up the last stanza it's supposed to go

When you  left
Left with another
For the first time
Heartbreak was found
Sunshine
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4 posted 11-20-2009 04:42 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Welcome to Passions!
Please check your email for a
Very special greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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Welcome to Pip!!

Nice poem!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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