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Rosie_Orange
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0 posted 11-16-2009 07:16 AM       View Profile for Rosie_Orange   Email Rosie_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosie_Orange

summer time,

has arrived,
with heat and sun
but we’re deprived.

birdsong so sweet
the clear blue sky
fresh mowed grass
   look, the last butterfly.

watch that smog,
    break air.
grey and thick
a devil’s lair.

rivers, polluted
putrid smells
green gas bubbles
fill our wells.

painful winds,
       cut like knives.
like callous words.
they take our lives.

Destruction.

Lost girl..

Find me?

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1 posted 11-16-2009 02:38 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

A very heartfelt write, as I had no idea that human destruction had also reached there as well.  What a shame, we are doing this damage to this world of ours.
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love the contrast~~

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3 posted 11-18-2009 09:15 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Loved this. Very insightful and heartfelt.

-Zach
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4 posted 11-19-2009 08:04 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

made me wanna go over there and do something.... very good poem, made you think of a world outside the one we live in our daily lives....

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

 
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