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rebelangelv
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0 posted 11-13-2009 07:34 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rebelangelv


leave already
just get out
just go die
i'm better without
you once wanted my dead
now this is my creed:
you must die now
cause you're killing me
i regret the time i save you
the 1st, 2nd and last
it wasn't worth the fight
i wish i could change the past
seriously, i hope it's slow
i hope it hurts you too
then you'll be gone forever
so i don't ever have to see you
yes i'm full of malice
it's true, i don't care
but you're filling me with rage
just because you're sitting there
so just go kill yourself
not like you haven't tried before
sorry that i stopped it
go do it just once more
it's just not enough
that you're dying on the inside
i want you torn apart
and lying in the grave
so leave already witch
just go on and go die
please just do die
cause i'm seriously better without

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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1 posted 11-14-2009 01:29 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

This is a seriously intense rant I must say.  I always have to hope that people with these kind of anger issues find a way to turn it around, and communicate to be heard a little better.

        
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2 posted 11-14-2009 01:49 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

hahaha yea...lol but i wasn't angry when i wrote this. lol i've had writer's block so i've been messing around trying to write in other POVs and whatnot..and this came out haha
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3 posted 11-14-2009 02:05 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

You succeeded in doing an other's POV well.
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4 posted 11-14-2009 04:28 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

thank you

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

precious pearls
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5 posted 11-14-2009 09:46 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

so deep...so powerful...so much anger...loved it, can totally relate

-Kai
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6 posted 11-14-2009 10:17 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

thanks kai!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Rosie_Orange
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7 posted 11-15-2009 01:31 PM       View Profile for Rosie_Orange   Email Rosie_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosie_Orange

its quite incredible! from the first line, i wanted to read the whole poem, and it really hits emotions!
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8 posted 11-15-2009 07:01 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

thank you! it means a lot. it's the first i've written in months

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