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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2009-11-13 05:54 PM


This is for TWLOHA day
srry, i totally stole the Beattles' title :p
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We live in a world
of self destruction.
We bring ourselves up,
only to be brought back down.

We hurt ourselves
to solve the pain
that demolishes our sanity,
it makes us go insane.

The only way out,
is to carve our bodies.
Mark up, dress up, scar it.
It's who we are.

Love is the answer.
Love is all we need.
All we need is love.
All we need is love.

Yes, this is what we need
to convince ourselves otherwise.
To change our habits,
and become free.

We break free when we are loved.
We learn to be free when we are
embraced with never-ending hugs of love.
We learn to be truly happy.

So don't carve yourself in pain,
search for love in unexpected places,
and make yourself smile.
Help yourself be free.




L.O.V.E

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

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1 posted 2009-11-13 10:27 PM


Ah I wish I could only do what your poem says.
Nice poem Julianna.

-Zach

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 2009-11-13 10:43 PM


thanks zach! (its been a while, hasn't it..?)
it took me forever to actually figure this out, everyone will eventually, it just takes time and patience.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

Rosie_Orange
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since 2009-04-20
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3 posted 2009-11-16 07:37 AM


i think TWLOHA is an incredible day because its show's people who think they're unloved, that there are people who care for them, even though they've never met.

Your poem is special because it highlights why love is so important in life.

'Without love, one shall perish.'

Lost girl..

Find me?

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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4 posted 2009-11-16 09:18 AM


thanks so much, rosie_orange!
that is one of the reasons i support TWLOHA so much.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

Stitches
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since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
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5 posted 2009-12-01 01:42 PM


A lovely insight.

I enjoyed it

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

Belinda
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since 2006-01-30
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6 posted 2009-12-10 03:43 PM


a great philosophy!
Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

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