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Dirge Of Deliverance

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Elias Nevermore
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0 posted 11-12-2009 01:56 AM       View Profile for Elias Nevermore   Email Elias Nevermore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elias Nevermore

Black cat builds his house upon a rock
and the white cat burns it down.

Black cat builds his house upon the Lord,
and escapes the white cat's hell.

So burn fire burn.
Burn a crimson red,
and turn the white
into charred black.

Black cat builds his house upon a rock
and the white cat kills him now.

Black cat builds his house upon the Lord,
and his race will not die out.

So burn fire burn.
Burn a lyrical red,
and turn the black
into white again.

Ashes to Ashes,
Dust to Dust,
And it all came tumbling down.


"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All


[This message has been edited by Elias Nevermore (11-12-2009 03:05 AM).]

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I really like this! But I think I like it better without the last three lines. Nice write!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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