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asarosestoleherattention
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0 posted 11-11-2009 08:29 PM       View Profile for asarosestoleherattention   Email asarosestoleherattention   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for asarosestoleherattention


The way she caresses my body,
The heat that is sent to her fingertips.

The way she smiles when I call her name,
The way she shudders under my lips.

The way I feel when she holds me close,
The tightness of her arms around me.

The way she looks in to my eyes,
The way they swirl like a deep blue sea.

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

© Copyright 2009 Natalie Fairbrace - All Rights Reserved
Ravagence
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1 posted 12-17-2009 04:27 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

That is amazing!!! Seriously, your great. If there were one guy to get a girl with purely a single poem, you'd be the one! Great job!
asarosestoleherattention
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2 posted 12-18-2009 11:06 AM       View Profile for asarosestoleherattention   Email asarosestoleherattention   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for asarosestoleherattention

lol thanks

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

m48
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3 posted 12-18-2009 01:41 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48

cute. simply cute. also a good write. keep up the good work.

ps if you are new welcome from m48.
Leanne <3
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4 posted 12-19-2009 07:56 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

I'm with Ravagence, a very romantic and seductive poem, fantastic write
-Lee
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