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Teen Poetry #9

The way....

asarosestoleherattention
Junior Member

since 2009-10-27

Posts 15
england

0 posted 2009-11-11 08:29 PM

The way she caresses my body,
The heat that is sent to her fingertips.

The way she smiles when I call her name,
The way she shudders under my lips.

The way I feel when she holds me close,
The tightness of her arms around me.

The way she looks in to my eyes,
The way they swirl like a deep blue sea.

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

1 posted 2009-12-17 04:27 PM

That is amazing!!! Seriously, your great. If there were one guy to get a girl with purely a single poem, you'd be the one! Great job!

asarosestoleherattention
Junior Member

since 2009-10-27

Posts 15
england

2 posted 2009-12-18 11:06 AM

lol thanks

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

3 posted 2009-12-18 01:41 PM

cute. simply cute. also a good write. keep up the good work.

ps if you are new welcome from m48.

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

4 posted 2009-12-19 07:56 PM

I'm with Ravagence, a very romantic and seductive poem, fantastic write

-Lee

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