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Past Tense Angel

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pen&paper
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0 posted 11-11-2009 07:42 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for pen&paper

Can you see her?
The girl with those sad, cold, haunted eyes
Can you hear her?
The words she sings
The way she speaks
What do you feel when she walks by?

Sometimes I wonder
What exactly went wrong
Somehow I know
She once was the words to your song

She was quite the nice distraction
You were heaven in her eyes
She hung to your every word
The way she laughed
The way she spoke
Do you remember the way
That distant girl used to be?
She sees you
She remembers

Sometimes I wonder
How she could've done so much wrong
Somehow I know
You were the words
To her favourite song

Did you really love that girl?
When she had those wide, innocent eyes?
Did you hear the words she said?
She talked about you
Thinks bout you
Couldn't and sometimes Canít stand beiní without you


Remember how you looked into her wide, innocent, icy-blue eyes?
And told her
She was everything you ever wanted
You remembered every golden word she ever said
You couldn't stand being without her
You wanted to start and never end
Can you see yourself in those sad, cold, haunted eyes?
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asarosestoleherattention
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since 10-27-2009
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1 posted 11-11-2009 08:30 PM       View Profile for asarosestoleherattention   Email asarosestoleherattention   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for asarosestoleherattention

wow.
this is amazing.
very meaningful.
i think i understand it,
but either way, thats some really good work. <3

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

RevengeIsMine
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2 posted 11-11-2009 10:25 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Ohh how i love this.. The emotion and feelings.. truely amazing!!
pen&paper
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3 posted 11-12-2009 08:30 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen&paper

thanks bunches guys. it's actually a sequel (sort of) to my previous 'Wide, innocent eyes'
 
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