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Hey Satan, Send Me An Angel

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I am the arch angel
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0 posted 11-09-2009 10:44 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for I am the arch angel

Give me a reason, a reason to trust you
when all these things you say are untrue
You don't bother to think of what you do to me
and i guess my love was too deep for you to see

and i'll breathe a little harder now
since,i was always wrong and shall
you cross me off the list
and the lies appear out of the mist

and as i sit here and think
it all begins to link
you left me for a cheater like you
which makes all the rumors true

You unlocked the gate
for satan's own cupid, heartbreak
so satan send me an angel please
to ruin my life a little more ease
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1 posted 11-10-2009 08:15 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Dude.. this is EPIC! Like whoa dude.. I didn't know you had it in you to write something like this. Great job dude! Library of course.

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2 posted 11-11-2009 05:49 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

see? I told you it was good.
well...okay I didn't really say that, I just said that I liked it. But it is very good. :P

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3 posted 11-29-2009 01:12 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Not sure why but I think this would make a lovely song.

Maybe there are nice lyrical/rhythmic qualities?

I don't know but I love it. Read it about three times. xD

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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4 posted 11-30-2009 04:41 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

thanks!
 
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