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Okay so the last stanza sucks but eh I was describing what it looked like outside tonight. :P Enjoy?
Suspended on the wires and strings
The stars in milky white
Dripping tears to a waiting world
Falling through the black night

Scattered; they plot the midnight sky
Like fireflies hidden in the leaves
They dance in a sea of charcoal
Doing the stroke as the weave

Suspended on their wires and strings
They monitor the sleeping below
High among the clouds and moon
They stay softly aglow
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nooo i like the last stanza just as it is
 
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