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I somehow manage to come back to you
Doesn't take me too long
No matter how hard I try to ignore
I feel you here when your gone

No matter how I scatter the pieces
Your still my missing part
I don't feel your touch
Yet your warmth is in my heart

No chains or strings of twine
Hold me behind the bars
I'm drawn into your gravity
Falling like another star

Falling into your gravity
Its simple yet I'm so scared
Its unexpected
And I'm not prepared..

As I fall into your gravity


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1 posted 11-07-2009 11:24 PM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

"As i fall into your gravity"

i love that line
great write!
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i really really like it zach good job
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If I had four hands...I'd give you a quadruple thumbs-up.     
Great write.


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This was too disturbingly touching.

My favourite out of all I have read here so far.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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THank you so much for the comments everyone!
 
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