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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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I somehow manage to come back to you Doesn't take me too long No matter how hard I try to ignore I feel you here when your gone No matter how I scatter the pieces Your still my missing part I don't feel your touch Yet your warmth is in my heart No chains or strings of twine Hold me behind the bars I'm drawn into your gravity Falling like another star Falling into your gravity Its simple yet I'm so scared Its unexpected And I'm not prepared.. As I fall into your gravity |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
"As i fall into your gravity" i love that line  great write! |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
i really really like it zach good job |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
If I had four hands...I'd give you a quadruple thumbs-up.  Great write. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
This was too disturbingly touching. My favourite out of all I have read here so far. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
THank you so much for the comments everyone! |
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