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madelyn
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Last year I was afraid to lose you.
Last month I lost you.
Last week I cried for you.
Yesterday I was getting over you.
Today I am over you.
Today you lost me.
Next week you will cry for me.
Next month you will beg me.
Next year you will die for me.

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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 11-04-2009 04:16 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

LOVE THIS.. As for a title.. tell me it's horrible if u like lol but

"All Thats Left Of Yesterday, Last Week, Last Month, Last Year"
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2 posted 11-04-2009 01:21 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Yesterday Is Now Tomorrow
precious pearls
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Losing the People You Love

btw, great poem!
Ravagence
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4 posted 11-11-2009 05:01 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

I love this poem. The simplicity and honesty of it. Many girls who ignored me; this is what happened with me. They lost me.

As for a title:

"You came, you saw, you left."
Mas814
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5 posted 11-13-2009 06:50 PM       View Profile for Mas814   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mas814

Really to the point. And so true, if i were to name it, it would be
Closing the Door
Rosie_Orange
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6 posted 11-17-2009 04:56 AM       View Profile for Rosie_Orange   Email Rosie_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosie_Orange

i really liked the idea!!
maybe could've used a few more descriptions?

title:

YOU

Lost girl..

Find me?

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