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I am the arch angel
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since 02-02-2008
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nowhere,illinois,USA


0 posted 11-03-2009 10:16 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for I am the arch angel

you may of loved me
but i don't care
you show me you didn't care
and its over now

you may have loved me
but i don't care
you lied and decieved
and the more i failed to believe

you may of loved me
but i don't care
forever isn't forever
but goodbye is forever

you may of loved me
but i don't care
you say you love me with your hands
but you hate me with your eyes

you may of loved m
but i don't care
you left without a clue
and there is nothing left to do


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very misleading title won't you say?
haha but this was a poem i wrote over heartbreak,yada yada, who cares right? i hope you could bear your eyes reading this terrible thing
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RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
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1 posted 11-03-2009 11:43 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

It's def not terrible.. far from it.. Your very talented and i adore this.. i feel the same about my mum.. they can be medieval princess' together..
 
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