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I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02
Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2009-11-03 10:16 PM


you may of loved me
but i don't care
you show me you didn't care
and its over now

you may have loved me
but i don't care
you lied and decieved
and the more i failed to believe

you may of loved me
but i don't care
forever isn't forever
but goodbye is forever

you may of loved me
but i don't care
you say you love me with your hands
but you hate me with your eyes

you may of loved m
but i don't care
you left without a clue
and there is nothing left to do


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very misleading title won't you say?
haha but this was a poem i wrote over heartbreak,yada yada, who cares right? i hope you could bear your eyes reading this terrible thing

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2009-11-03 11:43 PM


It's def not terrible.. far from it.. Your very talented and i adore this.. i feel the same about my mum.. they can be medieval princess' together..
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