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All Of Me... (For All The People We Can't Live Without)

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RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
Posts 832
Australia


0 posted 11-03-2009 06:52 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Okay so the rhymings off.. and it probably sucks but atm.. it's the only words kicking in my head..

________________

Is there a cure for this pain
Maybe i should have something to eat
Food won't take this emptyness away
I'm too tired to admit defeat

Seem's i've made it through another day
Here in this cold room
On scraps and pieces left behind
I survive on the memory of you

All of me is all for you
You're the blood i seem to bleed
All of me is all for you
Your the only one i'll ever need

Is there a remedy for waiting
For Loves victorious return
Is there a remedy for hating
Every second that i'm without you

All of me is all for you
You're the blood i seem to bleed
All of me is all for you
Your the only one i'll ever need

All this life is all for love
It's the only road i'll choose
Out of every street and avenue
Only one will lead me to you

I've kept all of me just for you
You're the air i live and breathe
trapped here in this emptiness
I wish you never had to leave

Seem's i've made it through another day
Trapped here in this cold and empty room
With scraps and pieces left behind
I survive on the memory of you
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I am the arch angel
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since 02-02-2008
Posts 169
nowhere,illinois,USA


1 posted 11-03-2009 10:35 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

wow, jess such deep compassionate words, i wish i could put words together like you. such perfect harmony, this could be a good song. amazing writing from an amazing mind, good job
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 01-20-2008
Posts 887
Neverland


2 posted 11-06-2009 07:15 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Wow, this is really, really good Jess. Library for sure.




love you.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

Falling rain
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since 01-31-2008
Posts 2165
Small town, Illinois


3 posted 11-07-2009 07:28 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Amazing as always. Love ya

-Zach
nakdthoughts
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since 10-29-2000
Posts 19275
Between the Lines


4 posted 11-07-2009 06:35 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

nicely done~~

one little correction needed...whenever you are using Your and mean "you are" you need to write it you're.  You  did this  sometimes but not all the times when needed.

M
precious pearls
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since 07-24-2009
Posts 110
NJ; United States


5 posted 11-11-2009 04:48 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

wow... it was sooo pretty.... loved how you were so honest and yet the words still flowed... awesome poem!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

 
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