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HersheyKiss
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since 06-02-2008
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New Jersey


0 posted 11-03-2009 12:29 PM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HersheyKiss

Hey, so here's another poem. Let me know what you think and maybe help me with a title. Thanks

Another night in my room
It's always the same
I hear his footsteps outside my door
I hear him call my name
Shivering and shaking
Here comes the fear
On his breath I can always smell the beer
Trying not to breathe
Wondering whats next
The whole time I'm staring at the exposed hair on his chest
I scream and fight to get free
It's no use, it wont work
This has to happen to me
After he's done and my soul feels gone
I think about what I could've done wrong
I cry to myself wondering "why me??"
I wish he would die and leave me be
Even if he did, I wouldn't be set free
He put a child inside of me
Ill live this nightmare all through my life
No matter what, Ill live in fright.
Hoping someday that he'll go away
I know he won't because she wants him to stay
It makes me want to die
So I can hide whats growing inside
Worried all the time that someone will guess
Why I hate him the best
Its because of what he's done to me
Making me a mother to be.
© Copyright 2009 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
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1 posted 11-03-2009 06:34 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Hey hunni...

Is this an old poem or are u pregnant again??

BTW how is Jess??
HersheyKiss
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since 06-02-2008
Posts 137
New Jersey


2 posted 11-03-2009 06:54 PM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HersheyKiss

Hey!!!
Jess is doing good. Starting to walk she's getting so big. I'll send you a picture.
How are you and Amelia doing?
precious pearls
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since 07-24-2009
Posts 110
NJ; United States


3 posted 11-11-2009 04:32 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

OMG love it!!!! beautiful, very honest....
BTW how are you? and are you pregnant agian?
hope to talk to you soon!
-kai

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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