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I am the arch angel
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You shall not ever be considered as you were
but as another piece of history
You said you'll love me forever
But now its a mystery

I'll never forget you
burning my mind with your passionate hate
But your love was not true
and for you a terrible fate

If you only felt my pain
I'll trade you back, no fare
But my storm cloud will continue to rain
and baby i don't care
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1 posted 10-31-2009 09:39 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Dude, that first stanza was killer. I couldn't even come up with something like that.

Keep up the writing
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Wow..I definitely think this is one of the best poems I have ever read by you.  

Keep it up.

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