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So here i am again

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I am the arch angel
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0 posted 10-27-2009 06:57 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for I am the arch angel

So here i am again,
falling away from the world
Somewhere i've always been
Upset over another girl

Grief never fails
The world never ends, (or so they say!)
As my skin turns pale
and the truth continues to bend

If this turns out to be the end
Wrap my shattered heart and give it a send
© Copyright 2009 Keagan lear - All Rights Reserved
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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1 posted 10-27-2009 09:56 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

i love this, its short and..."not-so-sweet" (if you know what i mean).
the rhyming and the length was just perfect.
library.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

I am the arch angel
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2 posted 10-27-2009 10:04 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

its a sonnet, i learned about them in english class and with current events. it just came...
I am the arch angel
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3 posted 10-27-2009 10:05 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

wait no no its not. wrong thing!
RevengeIsMine
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4 posted 10-28-2009 03:16 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

YOUR BACK.. Oh how i love u..
YOU CAN SOO WRITE!!.
xx
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5 posted 10-28-2009 04:38 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Hey dude
Its been awhile since you've last post. Glad to see ya back.
Nice write btw

-Zach
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6 posted 10-30-2009 11:44 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Beautiful write  

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

 
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