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Together It's One

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Ravagence
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0 posted 10-25-2009 08:37 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

Rain is falling,

yet itís not raining.

It comes from the trees,

their tears,

and they fall with each other,

Blending their emotions.

Becoming one.

Stronger.

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Thick_Goddness_973
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1 posted 10-29-2009 08:24 PM       View Profile for Thick_Goddness_973   Email Thick_Goddness_973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Thick_Goddness_973

wow... this one really spoke to me in particular... i think what you're trying to say is that the rain drops are falling from the trees, using the metaphor that the trees are crying. Then your saying that the tears comes together. I think the overall message here is that people band together so that they can each "cry" on each other's shoulders.... just like how tears of rain band together to become one.... Excellent poem
precious pearls
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2 posted 10-29-2009 08:34 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

right again cassie! it's like, it had to make me think a min lol. but to me that's what a good poem does... great job!

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   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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3 posted 10-31-2009 03:20 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

Thanks All! :P And your right about the meaning.
 
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