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Thick_Goddness_973
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Keeping Away The Tears
As you Look In the Mirror
Finding tears flowing  down your face
Trying to reach the peek of the lies to find the truth
Searching  Yourself Asking ,What did I ever do ?
To deserve A Faith Like this
Crying Out For Help
But No one Hears
You reach out for a hug
But the one who says they love you
Tugs Away leaving you in the cold
Making You Feel All Alone
As you search deeper
You find a feeling inside
That  Hurts Like A thousand Bullets
Being Shot At The Soul And Heart
The World You Live in  Being Torn Apart
The House You Was Brought up in was never a home
But Yet You Still Smiled
Turned Around And Took A Third Glimpse
And You Saw A Survivor  
You  Could’ve Listen to the one ‘s
Who Said Your Never Amount To anything
That You’ll Never Be Happy  Any time Soon
But You Laughed Every Day  
You Made The Best Of What you had
Now Everyday When You Look In that mirror
Now Your Keeping Away those tears

-signing off-
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1 posted 10-25-2009 07:53 PM       View Profile for rachaelfuchsberger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rachaelfuchsberger

Excellent first post. Welcome to PiP!

Arana Darkwolf

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beautiful
Krysti
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amazing post.
meaningful and deep.
nice
x

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

 
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