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Guardian Angel (You Used to be Here)

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This is a song that I'm working on, it's still a bit rough and i'm not happy with the bridge but i figured i'd just post it anyway.
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Guardian angel,
my life is falling apart,
and I can't stop it.
I'm trying to hold on,
But I can't keep from fading away,
you're just to far from what's right.

Run, I just can't hold back.
Rescue me,
Help me,
You used to be here.

Darkened are the days,
and the nights just drag on.
I can't keep from running honey,
I'm scared.
You're just to far away.

Run, I just can't hold back.
Rescue me,
Oh help me.
You used to be here.

Oh where has my angel gone?
I need you to hold on.
Where did you go my angel?

(I don't want to)
Run, I just can't hold on
(So)
Rescue me,
Help me...

Guardian angel,
You used to be here.
{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
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1 posted 10-22-2009 09:05 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Oooo!!! Great song! I can't wait till you have it all finished.

(P.S. I can be your guardian angel :P)

-Zach
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2 posted 10-22-2009 06:51 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thanks Zach!

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

 
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