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Falling rain
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0 posted 10-20-2009 08:05 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I wish I was something special
Something magnificent and great
To mean something more then that
But your my heavy weight

Am I a disappointment
Inside those deep blue eyes?
I'm sorry I can't be better
But why do you despise?

I wish I was shining
Something brilliant in the sun
Forever in your spotlight
But still my tears run

Why can't I be better?
Your too blind to see the truth
I wish I was something beautiful
Something meaningful to you..  

  

( I ask myself this all the time when I stare in the mirror)
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-21-2009 01:36 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Hey Zach,

I ask myself the same questions

(except I have brown eyes, lol)

Nice write! I think we should talk more, send me an email, okay!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 10-21-2009 09:17 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Oh my freakin' gosh.

This is the most bestest poem you have ever written! Guaranteed! It flows so nicely and has lots of emotion in it too.
But don't feel discouraged. I could go on about how everyone is unique and has their own talents and stuff but I know that probably wouldn't help much.

library for sures


P.S. I LOVE the third stanza.

{~~*~~}

P.P.S. you can talk to me you know..I Will listen.

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

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3 posted 10-22-2009 09:13 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

I wish I was something special
Something magnificent and great


you are.....
Krysti
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4 posted 10-22-2009 09:18 PM       View Profile for loveyourself102   Email loveyourself102   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for loveyourself102

i feel the same way id love to tlk wit u i will listen u know.
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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zach, oh my gooodnesss. i haven't been on in a while, and it shows. but now when i signed on again, i wanted to read something amazing, and i did. this was stunning and wonderful and heartbreaking all in one. i feel this way so many times its horrific.
ugh, i miss talking to you!!!!
i shall email you.
this deserves to be libraried a million and one times.
so i'll do the "and one".

*hugs*

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

Falling rain
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6 posted 10-27-2009 01:56 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Awww thanks guys! *hugs*

-Zach
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ZACH!!!
hehe, i emailed you.
you should check it, lol.
'cause i sent it like...last week, and i have NO REPLY!!! tis okay.
i forgive you., lol.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

asarosestoleherattention
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8 posted 10-27-2009 06:36 PM       View Profile for asarosestoleherattention   Email asarosestoleherattention   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for asarosestoleherattention

thats amazing.
that really is deep.
i think this is one of the best poems ive read so far.
very nice
xx
I am the arch angel
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9 posted 10-28-2009 05:57 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

nice write,add another to your collection of masterpieces between pictures and poems
Thick_Goddness_973
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10 posted 10-29-2009 08:13 PM       View Profile for Thick_Goddness_973   Email Thick_Goddness_973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Thick_Goddness_973

wow.... that's deep... REALLY  deep.... had put a knot in my heart too. made me think of "i cried for you" and "hazel eyes".... absolutely stupendous, fantastic job!
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**tear tear** awseome job zach!had me take a look in the mirror myself and then i asked myself, wat i think of me.... made me reflect... fantastical work!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

Falling rain
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12 posted 11-05-2009 04:52 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Thanks everyone! So glad to see my work is actually being read. lol
 
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