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RevengeIsMine
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0 posted 10-14-2009 05:28 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine


Hey Guys, Sorta been a while. Um.. so i guess this is a typical parents divorce, the one that did wrong you hate (before you flame there's more behind the scenes that i won't mention here) and then your left with the parent who you think will stand by you and your family but you know from your friends etc that it won't last long and he'll move on too.. My dad did.. Three months after she left.. So it's just me and the little brother and Amelia now.. Prob not the best poem of the day, but it means a lot to me..

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PARENTAL DIVORCE (BROKEN MEMORIES)

Your not worth these salty tears
Falling down my pretty face
Iím sorry that iím not good enough
And that i am your disgrace

I think i hate you more than mum
At least she seemed to care
But you donít really give a damn
I guess life is never fair

Iíve had enough I really have
Hell, I canít do this anymore
Iím tired of the disappointment
That leaves me crying on the floor

It hurts like hell it really does
I canít seem to stand the pain
You think money fixes everything
But it just makes me more insane

So tell me how to breathe again
Cause right now iím not so sure
Iím tired of these goddarn tears
And i canít do this anymore

Daddy, i'm so sorry
For all the things i've said
Your not worth the pretty tears
But i don't want you dead

I still can't forgive you
What is done, is done
You can have your new life
And i guess i'll have your son

So this is how it goes
As you walk out this door
You leave your broken box of memories
Lying on the floor
© Copyright 2009 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-15-2009 03:28 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Outstanding as always.

-Zach
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2 posted 10-17-2009 03:55 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

chilling.. loved a lot
Krysti
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3 posted 10-20-2009 05:50 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

I absolutely love this.
the stanza:

So tell me how to breathe again
Cause right now iím not so sure
Iím tired of these goddarn tears
And i canít do this anymore

was most definitely my favorite part.

Stay strong pretty girl.

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EmilyTheStrange
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nehematala
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4 posted 10-21-2009 04:36 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

Your not worth these salty tears
Falling down my pretty face
Iím sorry that iím not good enough
And that i am your disgrace

This part reminds me of my dad... when my mom died he left me with my sister... he can't even remember my birthday
asarosestoleherattention
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5 posted 10-27-2009 07:20 PM       View Profile for asarosestoleherattention   Email asarosestoleherattention   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for asarosestoleherattention

amazing,
gave me the chills.
<3

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

I am the arch angel
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6 posted 10-27-2009 09:44 PM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

wow amazing!
Thick_Goddness_973
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7 posted 10-29-2009 08:11 PM       View Profile for Thick_Goddness_973   Email Thick_Goddness_973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Thick_Goddness_973

OMG loved it! emotion, words made me think n jus wanna weep for you! BEE-U-TEE-FULL!
precious pearls
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8 posted 10-29-2009 08:40 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

i feel ur pain... made me think bout my dad n his BS... awesome message and reall life emotions too...

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

 
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