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priyanka
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0 posted 10-13-2009 08:34 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for priyanka


Stars I see in morning sky
Moon above shining high
Crooked bats, flying sly
Hurling moor breeze passing by

The pastors new, the shallow dew
This glistening dew, but morning few
The faltering sky, now still to die
Once so blue, high my thoughts flew

Now greying clouds, thunder loud
Then silver lining on these found
Musical were those things of sound
Now shrill sounds to all I'm boumd

Sunlight how it filled my days
Now I see is piercing rays
Filtering through the building tall
None it is reach my pitiful hall

Tender posies I see in mind
Now wilted petals is all I find
None there to take my side
No breeze , no scent to show me and guide

All these things I see at dawn
What a pity! Not a single fawn
Others left I feel forlorn
Now new feel inside me born


Now all these things from me shy
I see night in morning, oh my!
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priyanka
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1 posted 10-10-2011 04:23 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

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Margherita
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2 posted 10-10-2011 06:24 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I do hope, dear pryanka, that in the meantime things improved for you. This was a beautiful poem, though sad.

Love,
Margherita
priyanka
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3 posted 10-10-2011 03:49 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

Thank you so much Margherita! I'm perfectly fine now I was trying to change my name in my previous poems the way Ron had suggested! Thats why the previous post. I'm glad you liked it
maddorani
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4 posted 10-13-2011 06:15 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

I TOTALLLY LOVEEED IT
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