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Love's a Mess

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Ravagence
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0 posted 10-12-2009 06:58 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence

Bones shattered across the floor,
there sits the weapon in the mess.
A heart that has stopped beating,
filled once with a volatile substance.
And now that it has stopped,
so has the wielder.
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priyanka
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1 posted 10-13-2009 08:20 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

you capture pictures very well....
intense...but meaningful...
liked it...
 
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