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Clockwork_Orange
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screw it all
i just want to fight
or drink and sing
and stay up all night

till my stomache bleeds
from an ulcer that eats
the lining of my life

but i dont really matter
im the one you throw aside
and when other people come around
you somehow have to  hide

cant be seen with me
cant be one of them
cant be who you are
because your just too bent

i wanna scream everything youve ever said
i wanna write it on the mirror
and then take away your wheel
because without it you cant steer

crash and burn
id laugh and laugh
and say "yup
she WAS all that"
© Copyright 2009 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
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1 posted 10-12-2009 07:12 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

I actually like this..

You've always been an amazing writer.. Ur brillance never ceases to amaze me..

I've said it once.. so i'll say it again..

You're going to change the world some day, one word, one stanza, one poem at a time!
Falling rain
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2 posted 10-13-2009 06:51 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I agree with Jess.
You are really good at this.
Because you write in your own style.
Your don't try to restrict yourself in some rules just to make your poem great.
Keep on writing.

-Zach
prachi
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3 posted 10-26-2009 02:29 PM       View Profile for prachi   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for prachi

wow...itz amazing...u can actually c urself in d guy's place feeling lyk he z n doing wat he wishes he could do...
gud work...keep on writing...

prachi

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4 posted 10-27-2009 04:27 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

this is one of the poem Bryan used to write....!!!! WOW loved this!
Krysti
 
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