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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
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0 posted 2009-10-10 04:56 PM


This will probably get removed, but whatever. I was bored, listening to a song, and it inspired me to write this.


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Down a dark alley
a lady waits for her destiny.
It's cold ouside,
and she shivers in shame.

Her loved ones don't know
about her "business".
She's alone in her harmful choice,
and she's afraid.

After another night of guilty lust,
she gathers her things,
and heads back home...
where a daughter's waiting for her mother.

This little girl screams "MOMMY!!!!"
and gives her an embrace of love--real love.
All this woman needs in life,
is this angel hugging her knees.

When will she realize that?
What will it take for her to understand?
She's walkign to her room now,
she needs to spill her tears.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

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priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
1 posted 2009-10-10 06:18 PM


Terrific write...
A mother doe so much for her child...all the pains and sacrifices...
liked it...

Falling rain
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2 posted 2009-10-10 10:11 PM


Hmm I don't know if this will get pulled Julianna. So far it doesn't go against any of the guidelines. But good write anyway.

-Zach

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