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Your beauty goes beyond comprehension
Its dazzles me pass my wit
Like the last finishing puzzle piece
in your arms; I feel this fits.

Under the veil of sleep
I feel your every touch
Your warmth against my skin
You whisper lovingly as such

Though I must be dreaming
On some narcotic high
I know I'll just fall
from this sleeping lullaby

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Awe =C
I like this,
nice write.

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EmilyTheStrange
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It had a very nice rhythm to it. A bit bouncing and slightly upbeat. A nice refresher to my day. Gracias hombre.
 
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