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flyinwiild
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0 posted 10-07-2009 03:53 PM       View Profile for flyinwiild   Email flyinwiild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for flyinwiild

  i can feel it in the air tonight,
something is much different.
look up at the sky of lights,
and tell me you dont see it.
  can't you feel the wild winds
pulling at your heart?
the way we dance on moonlit streets,
this night, it must be ours.
  hold me tightly in your arms,
im scared i might fall down.
i know we must by flying
cause my feet now touch no ground.
  oh, dont let the clock catch up,
cause then we'll find the time.
the sun will rise above east cities
and light will fill our sky.
  baby just hold on tonight,
can we not live here for a while?
i cannot face the world again,
its much too dead to fly. .

can't you feel the air tonight?
its sweet smell lingers still.
and this feeling--we're lost in time
we'll never find again.
-bridge

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1 posted 10-07-2009 06:32 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Welcome to Pip!!!!!!!

Great first post! I really loved this.
Hope to see more of your work.

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2 posted 10-08-2009 02:42 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Like a dance without any doubt or care; works for me.

Loved the images. Good air is hard to find.

There is power in the pen.

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lovely... welcome to Passions
Krysti
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4 posted 10-09-2009 11:50 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

"can't you feel the air tonight?
its sweet smell lingers still.
and this feeling--we're lost in time
we'll never find again"

Aah...such nice thoughts...

lovely...
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Welcome to pip!

Nice poem!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.
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6 posted 10-25-2009 08:12 PM       View Profile for rachaelfuchsberger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rachaelfuchsberger

Welcome to PiP!! I've enjoyed this piece.

Arana Darkwolf

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7 posted 10-31-2009 12:59 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

aww this reminds me of all the fun times i had with friends when i wish the night would never end.  Great write  
-Lee
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