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I don't like how you treat her.

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Ravagence
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0 posted 10-05-2009 04:10 PM       View Profile for Ravagence   Email Ravagence   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravagence


I don't like it when you talk about her like that,
Talking about how much you want to bang her:

How much you want her in your arms.


Your not who she needs;
she needs someone to keep her safe:

How much of a person like that are you?


She's sensitive and doesn't need someone all over her,
She needs someone to give her space:

Someone to listen.


I'm going to tell you to go away,
you in-sensitive person:

Don't dare go near any girl until you can be nice.


Women are toys,
Not even close:

They are

sensitive
beautiful
fragile.


Something you can't handle yet,
don't hit them:

Don't hurt 'em either.


Or you'll have to deal with me,
and thousands of guys who feel the same way.
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priyanka
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1 posted 10-05-2009 04:28 PM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

nice thoughts...
Don't know why some of them are so perverted!
you put it across well...

"Women are toys,
Not even close:

They are

sensitive
beautiful
fragile"

I liked that a lot...so true...wish everyone felt that way!
Assassin_of_Verse
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2 posted 10-05-2009 09:11 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Women are to be respected and heard. Lol, unless you (us) men (boys) no longer wish to have children... >.<

There is power in the pen.

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3 posted 10-06-2009 02:27 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Enjoyed... how very true...

oh and yes Andrew put nicely... no children... lol

Krysti
 
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